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And she won’t change her mind

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It was late afternoon , she strolled in the farmyard and saw two  eyes staring at her .

‘Sooo cute !! Such an adorable calf !’she  exclaimed to herself and went ahead to stroke it.

Few minutes later , she heard footsteps …

She turned back and looked …

“WHO ARE YOU and What are you doing here ?! ”

“I…I…am just”  before she could say anything further she was interrupted by

Jamie “cool, bro ,  thats Liz we are off for some fish  , come on Liz ”

he called .

At the cafe Liz was still reeling under the impression of Joshua O Riley ‘ s image .Never in her eighteen  years had she seen someone so beautiful that made her stutter.She was dating Jamie for 3 years now , was happy , probably that Josh guy already has someone ,plus he was rude ,  well none of my business she said to herself. Looks are not everything …

This story (147 words)

is in response to FFFAW challenge hosted by Priceless Joy and thank you to majesticgoldenrose for the photo prompt.

check here for the challenge

https://flashfictionforaspiringwriters.wordpress.com/2017/02/27/fffaw-challenge-week-of-february-28-2017/

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10 thoughts on “And she won’t change her mind

  1. You made her emotions come to life. And loved the language. Nice one.

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  2. Great story! It reminded me of that song, Be Happy Who You are With. Hopefully, she will be happy with Jamie!

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  3. They met over a cow – how romantic! Sweet tale 🙂

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    • actually she already had Jamie as a boyfriend and decided to not let her mind hover over the one she met over a cow , 🙂 therefore the title…but if you have her prefer the other one over a period of time thats your take …probably in the future , then its indeed romantic !

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  4. Hi, I’m majesticgoldenrose, and I am glad you used my prompt. Great post, btw! I love how you show Liz’s thoughts and emotions…. so cool!

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  5. Hmm! I perceive more dilemma. I hope she stays happy with Jamie.

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